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Ha-ha, sorry for the wait people!
I know it's been a long time since I have uploaded ANYTHING. Im pretty ashamed about that fact myself.
Anyways, other than being extremely busy with the last few months of school (which finally just ended), I've decided something drastic.
I think my currently uploaded work is too rash and fast-paced, and had slowly become exactly what I had critiqued others against. I ended up doing better steering others the right way than I was for myself.
That and the fact that it was all much too rushed to get the two foxes together, not applying enough attention to detail.
So, I have decided to restart most of my work, and put a lot more effort and time into their development. I am also going to mainly do only one at a time, to pace myself and focus better. I think that I will start with Fiona's Happenings since I see so much potential for it, and the crap I've displayed so far only pisses me off, even just by thinking about it!
Sorry for my earlier bull----, and I what's left of my readers enjoys what work I manage to put up from this point forth.
On the other side, I've also been checking out a lot of other cool work.
If you get a chance, read the two main comics by Jay Naylor at his website:
www.jaynaylor.com
Because his work is extremely phenomenal!
He does have an adults section, but the 'Original Life' and 'Better Days' are free to read with no signup, and are very intricate, and emotional at points.
Please check him out if you have some spare time!
I know it's been a long time since I have uploaded ANYTHING. Im pretty ashamed about that fact myself.
Anyways, other than being extremely busy with the last few months of school (which finally just ended), I've decided something drastic.
I think my currently uploaded work is too rash and fast-paced, and had slowly become exactly what I had critiqued others against. I ended up doing better steering others the right way than I was for myself.
That and the fact that it was all much too rushed to get the two foxes together, not applying enough attention to detail.
So, I have decided to restart most of my work, and put a lot more effort and time into their development. I am also going to mainly do only one at a time, to pace myself and focus better. I think that I will start with Fiona's Happenings since I see so much potential for it, and the crap I've displayed so far only pisses me off, even just by thinking about it!
Sorry for my earlier bull----, and I what's left of my readers enjoys what work I manage to put up from this point forth.
On the other side, I've also been checking out a lot of other cool work.
If you get a chance, read the two main comics by Jay Naylor at his website:
www.jaynaylor.com
Because his work is extremely phenomenal!
He does have an adults section, but the 'Original Life' and 'Better Days' are free to read with no signup, and are very intricate, and emotional at points.
Please check him out if you have some spare time!
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Story for the ideas box
5 min read
Yeah, I'll transfer this into the ideas folder tommorow, right now I'm getting this annoying 'browser isn't supported' message and I have to update my stuff.
Aaannnnyyyways this is about how the bad guys, turn into the good guys and actually become the new freedom fighters on a post-apocalyptic Mobius. Of course, knowing me, the leader (or rather one of them) would be Fiona.
Aaaaannnnndddddd another idea...
Eggman was finally dead...
...but at what cost?
Sonic was dead, disintegrated by the same explosion that killed the doctor that fateful night out in space on the final Egg Carrier ever built, and destroyed.
Sally and Nicole were as well.
Even Antoine and Bunnie, away on their honeymoon to the Dragon Kingdom, and the people there were dead due to the massive carpet bombings that had occurred.
The only people left alive were they who escaped, and they who thought they were evil.
Almost all of them had a part in the final battle, and they all looked out onto the now burning, half destroyed planet which they used to call home...
Fiona and her friends...
The Babylon rogues and their kinsmen...
Some who had escaped prisons to fight against the freedom fighters...
Mammoth Mogul and his apprentices...
Even heroes and heroine, and villains from other zones had taken part...
But now they all stared in shock at what had happened.
Some, like the Moebians and Rogues stood atop the ruins of recently crashed air and space-craft.
Others from the sky, space, and the highest points they could reach from the ground. Just to see what exactly had happened.
In a fit of primal rage at losing once again, the frail old doctor known previously as Robotnik had unleashed entire arsenals of missiles and bombs from flying craft and various silos around the world at his monstrous robot factories.
...and now all was laid to waste.
...humans had been entirely wiped out, along with many other species.
Only a few freedom fighters were left standing, including one Miles Prower.
...but he was gone as well, even if in a different way.
Sonic and his friends were dead.
The good people of Mobotropolis and Station Square were wiped out entirely in the first set of attacks.
His parents were gone.
Almost all of his friends were gone.
Even Uncle Merlin and his distant relatives from Chun Nan were gone.
Dead.
Deceased.
Obliterated, and scattered to the wind.
He had even watched as the ship carrying his past love, Fiona, and the few people left that he actually knew personally fell into the sea alongside the now crumbling Angel Island.
But now, as he could feel the heat of the explosions and the raging fires reflecting off of his unclosing eyes, some thing changed.
Something cracked.
The old Tails was gone, no longer was he the follower, but the only one able to lead.
The only person who was still strong.
He still hadn't lost everyone, because he still had himself.
And that meant that he would do anything to protect himself, and the few survivors he could find.
________________________________________________________
As Miles walked through the slowly flooding carcass of the massive air fleet, he found too many numerous bodies to count. The only one he recognized was that of his Moebian counterpart.
And then he saw her.
Fiona was running at him, tears streaming, arms outstretched for an embrace that nearly knocked the hardened fox over as she came into his arms after so long.
After a minute of crying, she lifted her head up and was about to say something to the now slightly taller golden fox, but he only put a finger against her lips.
There was no reason for speech, they both knew what had happened.
They only kissed as they slowly felt the world crumble away from them as the sun slowly set...
"I love you, and I will never, Ever let anything like this happen again......."
________________________________________________________
That was three years ago.
Fiona remembered his words to her as she felt her head tugged up from the mud forcefully by her hair, and looked into the same fox's eyes again.
Only now, his eyes were full of evil, tyrannical fire of a mad man.
"Will you finally give up this charade and join me, Fiona? Even for love long lost?"
All Fiona heard the next second was the roar of her friends as they all ran up to meet the dictator and his army of brain-washed soldiers.
The red velvet fox only smirked. "Not likely, today at least!"
The feeling of being a Freedom Fighter had returned.
And so that's it, and no, I'm going to finish off my current stories before making this into an actual fic. I mean, I just need to get it down somewhere I wont lost it, right?
Aaannnnyyyways this is about how the bad guys, turn into the good guys and actually become the new freedom fighters on a post-apocalyptic Mobius. Of course, knowing me, the leader (or rather one of them) would be Fiona.
Aaaaannnnndddddd another idea...
Eggman was finally dead...
...but at what cost?
Sonic was dead, disintegrated by the same explosion that killed the doctor that fateful night out in space on the final Egg Carrier ever built, and destroyed.
Sally and Nicole were as well.
Even Antoine and Bunnie, away on their honeymoon to the Dragon Kingdom, and the people there were dead due to the massive carpet bombings that had occurred.
The only people left alive were they who escaped, and they who thought they were evil.
Almost all of them had a part in the final battle, and they all looked out onto the now burning, half destroyed planet which they used to call home...
Fiona and her friends...
The Babylon rogues and their kinsmen...
Some who had escaped prisons to fight against the freedom fighters...
Mammoth Mogul and his apprentices...
Even heroes and heroine, and villains from other zones had taken part...
But now they all stared in shock at what had happened.
Some, like the Moebians and Rogues stood atop the ruins of recently crashed air and space-craft.
Others from the sky, space, and the highest points they could reach from the ground. Just to see what exactly had happened.
In a fit of primal rage at losing once again, the frail old doctor known previously as Robotnik had unleashed entire arsenals of missiles and bombs from flying craft and various silos around the world at his monstrous robot factories.
...and now all was laid to waste.
...humans had been entirely wiped out, along with many other species.
Only a few freedom fighters were left standing, including one Miles Prower.
...but he was gone as well, even if in a different way.
Sonic and his friends were dead.
The good people of Mobotropolis and Station Square were wiped out entirely in the first set of attacks.
His parents were gone.
Almost all of his friends were gone.
Even Uncle Merlin and his distant relatives from Chun Nan were gone.
Dead.
Deceased.
Obliterated, and scattered to the wind.
He had even watched as the ship carrying his past love, Fiona, and the few people left that he actually knew personally fell into the sea alongside the now crumbling Angel Island.
But now, as he could feel the heat of the explosions and the raging fires reflecting off of his unclosing eyes, some thing changed.
Something cracked.
The old Tails was gone, no longer was he the follower, but the only one able to lead.
The only person who was still strong.
He still hadn't lost everyone, because he still had himself.
And that meant that he would do anything to protect himself, and the few survivors he could find.
________________________________________________________
As Miles walked through the slowly flooding carcass of the massive air fleet, he found too many numerous bodies to count. The only one he recognized was that of his Moebian counterpart.
And then he saw her.
Fiona was running at him, tears streaming, arms outstretched for an embrace that nearly knocked the hardened fox over as she came into his arms after so long.
After a minute of crying, she lifted her head up and was about to say something to the now slightly taller golden fox, but he only put a finger against her lips.
There was no reason for speech, they both knew what had happened.
They only kissed as they slowly felt the world crumble away from them as the sun slowly set...
"I love you, and I will never, Ever let anything like this happen again......."
________________________________________________________
That was three years ago.
Fiona remembered his words to her as she felt her head tugged up from the mud forcefully by her hair, and looked into the same fox's eyes again.
Only now, his eyes were full of evil, tyrannical fire of a mad man.
"Will you finally give up this charade and join me, Fiona? Even for love long lost?"
All Fiona heard the next second was the roar of her friends as they all ran up to meet the dictator and his army of brain-washed soldiers.
The red velvet fox only smirked. "Not likely, today at least!"
The feeling of being a Freedom Fighter had returned.
And so that's it, and no, I'm going to finish off my current stories before making this into an actual fic. I mean, I just need to get it down somewhere I wont lost it, right?
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Crew.
2 min read
Now, I am part of the handful of caucasian guys at my mostly African-American high school.
And I do crew.
Now, as is with most American schools, football and basketball players get the most recognition. In my school, the football team has won 3 state medals over the years. The basketball team won one medal.
Our crew team has won seventeen.
That is what should be recognized, especially because the high amount of work that we do even months before we got in the boats on the water.
Right now, I just got back from practice. And this is only the second week of crew practices.
We did a 3K (three thousand meter) piece on the Ergs (Ergonomic Rowing Machine) at the beginning of practice after stretches and five minutes of quiet sitting. Then we did Calestetics and Core exercises, and if you know what the workouts are then this is what we did in the Cals. 200 jumping jacks, 90 push ups, 150 sit ups, 80 jumps, and 75 squat-thrusts. And the only break we got between each exercise was a half minute of running in place. It was broken up into three sets at least.
Then after that we did another nonstop piece on the Ergs, this time a 7K. Seven thousand meters. That's far.
Then we brought the machines outside, broke them down, and stacked the into the trailer.
It took us about fifteen minutes, and it was 29 degrees outside with a string icy wind in bursts of high wind.
We were in T-Shirts and shorts. I had on a 100% cotton, athletic fit shirt, and the type of shorts that has all the big holes to let air through. Damn.
I got home at 6:00, and a regular school day only lasts to at most 3:30 if you have a tenth period (which I do) which is also when crew starts.
And I do crew.
Now, as is with most American schools, football and basketball players get the most recognition. In my school, the football team has won 3 state medals over the years. The basketball team won one medal.
Our crew team has won seventeen.
That is what should be recognized, especially because the high amount of work that we do even months before we got in the boats on the water.
Right now, I just got back from practice. And this is only the second week of crew practices.
We did a 3K (three thousand meter) piece on the Ergs (Ergonomic Rowing Machine) at the beginning of practice after stretches and five minutes of quiet sitting. Then we did Calestetics and Core exercises, and if you know what the workouts are then this is what we did in the Cals. 200 jumping jacks, 90 push ups, 150 sit ups, 80 jumps, and 75 squat-thrusts. And the only break we got between each exercise was a half minute of running in place. It was broken up into three sets at least.
Then after that we did another nonstop piece on the Ergs, this time a 7K. Seven thousand meters. That's far.
Then we brought the machines outside, broke them down, and stacked the into the trailer.
It took us about fifteen minutes, and it was 29 degrees outside with a string icy wind in bursts of high wind.
We were in T-Shirts and shorts. I had on a 100% cotton, athletic fit shirt, and the type of shorts that has all the big holes to let air through. Damn.
I got home at 6:00, and a regular school day only lasts to at most 3:30 if you have a tenth period (which I do) which is also when crew starts.
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Seriously?
1 min read
If you guys think one of my things needs a mature content tag and it doesn't already have one, you can just tell me you know :/
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Of The Day:
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Song of the Day
Explosive (Orion & Ed Leal Production)
by
Bond
on the album
Classified
Also, if you have Pandora, get the channel
The Sails
Color of the Day
Verdigris Green
This is the color which copper becomes after oxidation occurs)
Sonic Character of the Day
Amy Rose
Amy Rose first appeared in Sonic CD, and has been in 49 video games since then.
Explosive (Orion & Ed Leal Production)
by
Bond
on the album
Classified
Also, if you have Pandora, get the channel
The Sails
Color of the Day
Verdigris Green
This is the color which copper becomes after oxidation occurs)
Sonic Character of the Day
Amy Rose
Amy Rose first appeared in Sonic CD, and has been in 49 video games since then.
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